I fell in love with you…. When your jokes brightened up my dark days, When we talked all night long about our lives, our dreams and the future, When I felt a tingling effect after you held my hand for the first time, When you stayed up all night to put my demons to rest, […]
I FELL
I wrote this poem after a particularly bad fight with an ex. The fight ended with me storming to my hostel room, rushing into my room straight to the washroom and sitting under the shower (fully clothed) and howling. After the cold shower had calmed me down, I started introspecting about the situation and how that “love” was making me feel. This poem was written right after. These are real things that happened.
Thanks, Simran, for including this in her ongoing Shades of Love series. ❤️
Hope you like the poem!
Happy Panda 
Beautifully penned!
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Thank you so much!
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Powerful and raw. I love the honesty.
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Thank you!!!
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Very relatable, Moksha 💜
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❤️
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Ugh love can be so painful sometimes!! ❤️🩹💔 In feel you M, you know I do! xo
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Yes, I do!! ❤
Thank you!
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“when I realized that loving you meant loving myself less.” – This is a painful lesson to learn indeed.
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Yess! Self-love is a hard lesson to learn! 🙂
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Beautifully written my friend
Make more posts of poems. You are so gifted and you do not even realize it.
Love can be daunting sometimes. I always say it’s better to put yourself first as a priority before anyone else. It’s not easy though😅😅
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Loved it !!
Great work happy panda!!
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I could feel your pain in your words.. Thanks for sharing Moksha.. Took me right back!
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so beautiful… love it Ru! 💖
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This is so touching🙌🏻😥
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Nice poem… after break up self introspection is vital in order to avoid the repeatitation of the same situation…
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